Revelations and repetitions
I’m so very nearly at the half way point.
The chances of finishing this draft before the end of November are slim. Not impossible, just unlikely. It will mean writing 6 pages a day which is definitely doable - provided I have no more distractions and stop procrastinating. But the story is beginning to bore me which I’m taking to not be a very good sign. Or maybe it’s the last scene I wrote last night (I say wrote, what I mean is drunkenly splurge words on a page in the hope that they make some sort of sense in the morning). In theory, I quite like the scene potential but it definitely feels like a filler and not actually furthering the story.
It’s not going entirely badly. I’ve written a couple of characters that I like a lot. One surprised me entirely because I wasn’t sure I was going to include him and haven’t really done any background planning for him but there he was, on the page, telling me exactly how he talks, how he acts and what he looks like. This morning, while driving to work, I suddenly realised who would be the right person to play him and, with that revelation, understood what the character was going to do and how he would fit in more to the main storyline.
The bigger problem lies elsewhere. I’m not convinced by the motivations of the protagonist - no, strike that, I am convinced by his motivations, I’m just not sure that I’m going to be able to get him to where I want him. I think I’ve worked out how to do this (partly inspired by some of the Metlab feedback) and it does involve changing a lot of the backstory, which is fine. However, it also involves changing most of what I’ve written. So I’m in a quandary. Do I push on, finish this draft then go back to the storyboard and make the necessary amendments then or do I stop where I am and start again? The answer, I feel, must be to carry on. To paraphrase William Goldman, having stuff written down will make it easier to change later on.
None of the successful blogging professionals seem to write about this sort of dilemma but I guess they must go through it. I don’t know? As Chip said yesterday with his “boring draft update”, that he felt “listening to writers talk about writing isn’t the most interesting thing in the world” and I understand where he’s coming from. Listening to me whining about how I can’t get it to work (the story, you filthy minded creature!) can’t be scintillating on any level.
Okay, I admit it, this is a self serving, attention seeking post which I’m hoping will ellicit a couple of responses of “Don’t sweat it - we’ve all been there and that’s how it goes.” I guess I’ve just go so used to bashing out short scripts in not very much time at all and now I’m struggling on something that is so much longer. To use a running analogy, it’s like I’ve been running 5km races for ages and then decided to take on a marathon.

I thought you were talking about Nanowrimo for a second there!
The answer is, definitely: Don’t look back. Keep going. Assume the changes have been made if you have to, but push forward until the next draft.
If you get bored, throw something new in or throw a twist in or follow some other character and see where they take you!
Comment by Destructor — November 23, 2007 @ 12:03 am
No, not Nanowrimo. I just happened to set myself an imaginary deadline that coincided with it.
Cheers for the advice. I think “bored” was actually the wrong word. It was just that I was writing a scene and not feeling enthused about it despite it’s visual potential and what it may add to the story. (I’m all for killing my babies so if it doesn’t work, I will get rid of it). It just felt wrong. Thinking about it some more, I’ve realised that it doesn’t work where it is and needs to take place before the preceding scene.
Good advice about the throwing in a twist too. Unfortunately, I can’t follow another character as that would be obviously breaking the POV of the screenplay (story POV, not camera). But it has made me think about one or two other scenes where I could start a little differently.
Nice work with your novel so far, by the way.
Comment by Tom — November 23, 2007 @ 11:09 am
Thanks! It is a novel! It doesn’t need quotation marks!
Whenever you get bored in a scene, kill a baby. That always gets things going.
Comment by Destructor — November 24, 2007 @ 4:34 am
Not sure why I quoted it. Removed.
I fixed that scene last night. Just moved it in the scene order and gave it more of a purpose. It might still be a filler but it has a stay of execution for now.
Comment by Tom — November 24, 2007 @ 6:53 am